- Dec 1, 2018
That was some really fucking great critique. I just want to address a few points.I like the consept and everything but is that guy's face really needed to be put in every few seconds or so? 50% of the times he popped up wasn't even put in the right context.
You could also use some improvement in the editing such as removing the blue bars to make it look more professional.
Lastly but not least I noticed you made a promotion in the middle of the video. That's fine for me but what the problem was for me is that you did not have to type out the whole link while wording it out yourself. You could simply say "Link in the description" or something similar to avoid wasting the viewers time.
It was okay and I enjoyed the relaxed atmosphere although you could use some improvement which is why I'll give it a 7/10 .
It is a game based on the hoobit movies of Peter Jackson based themselves on the work of Tolkien.Is it a movie
Ehhhh i still don't understandIt is a game based on the hoobit movies of Peter Jackson based themselves on the work of Tolkien.
And I want to sayyou put great effort on the video. I find the arguments good and you are convicing.
Just about your voice, it feels like you are not insterested by the subject (It is just me I think).
Otherwise not a bad video beside from the quality of the images.